Proof read Otters Sonnet if you want... :P... I would appreciate it fyi. haha.

Anyone want to proof read otters sonnet... ???. No one in my family even understands what I'm talking about.

Alas poor man ever dodging away
From doom in a box falling through thy sky
Doom and despair, sorrow and hate; away!
Thee must run. Oh why, who did this, oh why.

Who did this, who, who dare be so evil
What a hideous wreck of a
Creature he must be. Why, a weasel!
A bloodthirsty creature indeed, hey!

Poor man, ever doomed to do the dance
Of death, despair! Doomed to fail! Alas man!
Who dare do this! Through his heart a lance;
Must go now! To save thy poor doomed man!

Tetris D! Tetris D! Tetris D! D!
Poor stick figure man, poor stick figure he!

Tetris D?

Its a game, play it, if you look in depth its so sad. Poor animated man is ever doomed to die a painful death.

wtf??????

I know zimmjeff... I just want someone that understands english to proof read . Kinda due tomorrow, and my english grade is a 60... Was going to do this in chat but didn't work out. And I figured I may as well do the most off topic off topic thread ever.

And Corey, you gave me a heart attack at first until I saw the text under the image. haha.

Kyle you could use this in college...but in high school ??? She might think you plagarized it.....or your doing drugs. Its to abstract...unless your english teacher is wishywashy.

It's pretty good. It has the correct number of syllables per line but seems to lack the true iambic pentameter in spots.

Meh, I think my teacher will accept it. I normally am wishy washy so hey.

And thats what I was worried about too, the iambic thingy. Will have to work on that, alot of spots don't make sense.

And haha Corey. Absolutely haha.